Merry Christmas!

You cannot be serious!?

What do you expect from a critique? Tips on how to harvest more fame online? Fetish community tips for fame?

Or a throughout critique pointing out every flaw possible for you to watch over?

Ok, I don't know what to say here, and I ain't refering to the abnormaly bellied indian girl above. I know there's a niche for this. I know it's of erotical nature.

Just from the erotism/fetishism side I have nothing to critize here. It's simple, for as long as it has what your fans comes here for, it's totally unimportant wether anatomy, light & shadows, or anything else are wrong. Keeping it simple: that belly and possibly the barely visible breasts are the only thing they all need to be happy. Your self-improvement, your expectation, dreams, goals. None of them are of interest to them, unless you paint them over that indian belly. And even then, they will only focus their attention on her belly alone.

From that, this is the only thing you'll get for "advice" and "critique":

1.-Make her belly bigger
2.-Make her boobs bigger
3.-Make her butt bigger
4.-Make her (insert body part here) bigger

If you want it from a technical point-of-view, I've just thought a long list of issues to be addressed. Amongst them the nature of this being enough to bury your chances of landing a job on anything that isn't a pay-per-view porn site.

But still, this was made only to arouse people. For as long as it does, nothing else matters!

And the same applies to every other piece in you gallery requesting a critique.